Talk:12 year old girl theory

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Reads more like a HowTo: than a regular article. I will look at this closely later, but I have a headache right now. --Danny Himself 13:12, 4 January 2007 (UTC)

Humo(u)r: 6 You have a sense of humor. Congratulations, as many here do not (I know- what is up with that?). The humor here is a little clichéd, though, and I think you should work on that. I'd advice reading articles by Savethemooses for some pointers on how to bring out your humor potential.
Concept: 4 The concept is imaginitive but in that sense it has been your downfall. If everything did have to appeal to 12 year olds no matter what, this article would be awesome, but alas, 12 year old girls don't rule the earth. Yet.
Prose and Formatting: 6 The whole article is written like some bastard child of a HowTo: article and and an UnBook. This is not very good. You need the article to read like an article. You have formatted the page pretty well, but there's still a lot of uncapitalized capital letters and such hanging around. If something is to be emphasized, don't capitalize it- put it in italics.
Images: 2 Face it, the images aren't particularly good. The unicorn picture is way too small, and the American Worldview picture is pretty much unrelated.
Miscellaneous: 0 The article kinda trails off halfway through and becomes an article about emo types. Naughty, naughty. Keep your eyes on the prize.
Final Score: 18 You have potential to become a good writer here. Something.. just something, is holding you back. I suggest you do a bit of reading (featured articles, mainly) and eventually the idea will come, and words will blossom from your keyboard like beautiful rhodedendrons.
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Yes, I agree, this article would be better in a HowTo: format.. maybe HowTo:A famous entertainer? I don't know. —Braydie at 16:54, 5 January 2007 (UTC)

OMFGSZZZ XD LAWL WTF. Man in the Ceiling 23:31, 26 March 2007 (UTC)

Agree with your article =] and i think that 12 year old girls pretty much do rule the world




AN ACTUAL 12 YEAR OLD GIRL'S POINT OF VIEW ............................................................................................................................. i, bein a 12 yr old girl, agree with only a few parts, i think too many 12 yr olds r too obsessed with miley cyrus an the bros of jonas or watever theyre supposed to be called so must people sum it up that all 12 yr ol girls lik mylee cyrus an think theyre gonna marry sumone from bros of jonas.... but unlik so many stupidly cunfuzed girls, me an all my frens, hate all the stuff, cudnt care less bout them, an were into bands like the red jumsuit apparatus, panic! at the disco, avenged sevenfold, disturbed, m.c.r (my chemical romance), santana ,puddle of mud, creed, zz top, the eagles, kid rock, foo fighters, flyleaf, red, six am, system of a down, and so much more bands that haf of my guy frens havnt even herd of, so if u want the freggin weird-freakky-stupid-retarded-cunfuzed- girls, then plz lisen an follow it, but if u want a realistic girl, who dont car a thin bout bros of jonas, mylee cirus, or tha STUPID musical in hi skool crap, then ACT URSELF!!!!!!!!(we actual girls do hav different kinds u kno, theres more than jus one type!!!!)

Thank you so much for your opinion. Now please, go back to class. You still haven't learned to type correctly. Also, SPELL CHECK! It's a great tool and almost every computer has the capability to due it. Most do it automatically, in fact... Anyway, this is a comedic site. This is poking fun at the average 12 year old girl. We don't care about your opinion, to be honest. Well, I don't. And you too have a horrible taste in music (Disturbed, System of a Down, ZZ Top, Kid Rock, The Eagles, and Santana are the only good/decent musicians you listed). Don't try to act high and mighty just because you don't like Disney crap. You still like that deploring emo crap. --Pleb Dexter111344 • Complain here • Vote now! 02:43, 3 September 2008 (UTC)

[edit] 12 year old genius

I am a genius.

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