Talk:Al Qaeda Homepage

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[edit] From Pee Review

My first Uncyclopedia page ^<>^. Please give comments and tell me whether I should nominate it for VFH.--Mr.Huffy 08:45, 3 April 2007 (UTC)

Humo(u)r:	6.5	The humour mainly stems from the general idea but it's enough to keep you giggling
Concept:	9	Really good idea
Prose and Formatting:	9	The new structure and colour scheme of the article changes it from bog-standard to top notch. Really looks like a lot of group-homepages
Images:	6	Quite decent images, but nothing brilliant
Miscellaneous:	8	...
Final Score:	38.5	By writing as if it's some crazy terrorist doing the writing you can write as badly as you like and it comes out well which must be pretty cool. If you wanted to extend it you could have a message board which would have considerable comedic potential.
Reviewer:	--Kelpan 22:43, 4 April 2007 (UTC)

Just a quick take on the article, unfortunately I can't do the full review right now:

This article should either --

explain stuff about the Al Qaeda homepage, or
look like a real homepage of some sort.

In other words, it should not look like an Uncyclopedia article but pretend to be a homepage.

Take a look at NEDM for an example of a page formatted to look like a web page instead of like an article. If you have trouble with the formatting shout for help; it's a pretty good idea. ----OEJ 15:41, 3 April 2007 (UTC)

Thanks Jack I've edited it alot now, but a full review is needed, so other people please review if you have time--Mr.Huffy 01:18, 4 April 2007 (UTC)

[edit] 9/11 and Urban Planning

As a planning student myself, I deplore the tragedy that was 9/11, but think the fact that one of the main hijackers was a planning student is rather funny. Shouldn't such people be working to build stuff, not destroy stuff? Rickyrab 14:07, 15 June 2007 (UTC)

[edit] Al Qaeda should get Snapvine

I made a snapvine for my Ku Klux Klan Homepage and so far integrating it is a rounding success, and the snapvine could be used to leave messages for yourself, Kinda like voicemail. --NXWave 08:08, 30 October 2007 (UTC)