| Humo(u)r:
| 4.5
| The jokes are a bit too obvious and lack subtlety. This isn't a bad idea for an article, but it needs a better structure and buildup. Gradually reveal disturbing things about the narrator rather than blatently saying them. Also avoid cliches like emos, they kill humour like poison.
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| Concept:
| 7
| Not a bad idea but it needs work.
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| Prose and Formatting:
| 5
| The sentence structure needs improvement.
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| Images:
| 7
| The images are fine. The caption on the image representing hell was quite funny.
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| Miscellaneous:
| 6.5
| Don't know what this is for.
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| Final Score:
| 30
| Overall its not a bad idea it just needs a more subtle approach.
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| Reviewer:
| --Winstanley1 12:07, 28 April 2007 (UTC)
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