Talk:Carmine
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Fuck, how do I revert?
- Go to history, select the version you want to revert to, click compare selected versions, select the edit button on the one that appears on the left, click save page. --R. Daneel Olivaw (Gaia - Foundation) 02:38, 20 September 2007 (UTC)
- In the words of Dominic Santiago...thanks, man. I've got way too much work to fix up this page tonight, though...
- No problem, man, but you might wanna consider signing your posts lol. --R. Daneel Olivaw (Gaia - Foundation) 22:41, 21 September 2007 (UTC)
- Yeah, I'll do it more often. Barcode711 00:35, 7 November 2007 (UTC)
- No problem, man, but you might wanna consider signing your posts lol. --R. Daneel Olivaw (Gaia - Foundation) 22:41, 21 September 2007 (UTC)
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[edit] From Pee Review
[edit] Carmine
| Humo(u)r: | 8 | Pretty funny, though some bits are overly descriptive in unfunny matters and that tends to bring the funnyness average down a bit. |
| Concept: | 9 | Pretty good concept, though some paragraphs sort of wander away from it. |
| Prose and Formatting: | 7 | Some paragraphs are too short, so they should be either joined or huffed, IMHO. |
| Images: | 5 | Images are definitely the weak point in this article. Try to find some funny images, like on this one video on Youtube where a big screen just reads "36 Carmines were harmed in the filming of this movie" or something similar, for example. Use the images to further spoof the way he always dies. |
| Miscellaneous: | 9 | I love the way you relate Carmine to Darth Vader and Harry Potter (only person to survive the killing curse) to explain why he always survives his "deaths". Try to remove the red links though, this is the only thing keeping it from a 10 in miscellaneous. |
| Final Score: | 38 | An article with an incredible amount of potential because of its very spoofable content. Just needs some tweaking here and there and, IMHO, it will be ready for VFH. |
| Reviewer: | --R. Daneel Olivaw (Gaia - Foundation) 02:00, 18 September 2007 (UTC) | |
[edit] Thanks for the pic...just one more!
If we can come up with one more picture that's even half the size of the headless one, I can fill the space beside the History part. No idea what to put there, though...
L“You gotta be kiddin' me!”
~ Carmine on the state of this article
I'm doing some minor trimming. SOmeone who's actually good at humour...help me out... Barcode711 00:52, 8 February 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Done!
Thanks to KneeChee and Joakimlinde, this article is ready for another Pee Review. Question being, though, is how do I resubmit it? Barcode711 23:38, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
