Talk:Cleveland State University
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suggestions please?
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[edit] Cleveland State University
| Humo(u)r: | 3 | Schools are a bitch to make funny. Most humour here seems to center around random namedropping. This is bad. Try to focus on school in general (things that anyone who has gone to school would get). By that I mean focus; random is bad, namedropping is bad. The combination is worse. |
| Concept: | 4 | Did I mention that schools are a bitch to make funny? Oh. A lot of people try, I have yet to read one that succeeds. |
| Prose and Formatting: | 6 | Well, it's english. That's a good sign. Instead of a bunch of spread out, unrelated paragraphs, try putting them together (like "history", "campus", "students", etc). |
| Images: | 3 | Two pics isn't enough, the kitten huffing one doesn't fit at all with a school-themed page. |
| Miscellaneous: | 10 | |
| Final Score: | 26 | I don't mean to sound harsh, but this page needs work. Focus on the basics. Lose the Russian Reversal. Watch Animal House. |
| Reviewer: | Sir Modusoperandi 20:28, 19 May 2007 (UTC) | |
