Talk:Evil
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The Cruella bit would work if not for the fact that the name's misspelled; it's Cruella de' Ville, not d'Evil. Arkady 15:56, 31 March 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Evil by OEJ (5/3/08)
A rewrite by Cajek. ...who is me. Specifically, it needs ideas for expansion and feedback on the style. Who else could Barbara Walters interview? Is the interview style annoying? <May 02, 2008 [16:54]>
| Humo(u)r: | 7 | I actually laughed, which is rare for me when reading an article for review. It hurts to laugh. Also when I pee. (Good job). |
| Concept: | 8 | I really like interviews, and interviews with ultimate evils is a good idea. I do NOT find the interview style annoying, I like it. Very much. See endnotes. |
| Prose and Formatting: | 7 | Well-written, but I docked a point for formatting. Maybe it's a personal thing. |
| Images: | 6 | That's Babs, all right, but what about Sauron doing some cooking? |
| Miscellaneous: | 7 | I like the idea and hope it succeeds. |
| Final Score: | 35 | |
| Reviewer: | ----OEJ 18:56, 3 May 2008 (UTC) | |
I personally prefer formatting which gives the names of the person speaking, like this:
- Sauron: "I made Crêpe Suzette for the staff last night."
- Walters: "How did they turn out?"
- Sauron: "They were meant to transform the wardens into Nazgul but they turned into seagulls instead. I guess I botched the recipe."
But of course you must follow your own creative inspiration on that.
How about Hannibal Lecter? How about Satan? =Satan done= And maybe Tiny Tim? And perhaps Alien and Predator =A&P done=, now happily cohabiting in a prison cell in Algiers. ("I feel so wanted now...Ridley would never swap mucus with me. Predator -- I call her 'Sweet P' -- is a really caring individual that way.")
Also, I would expand the interviews just a bit. Just give a little more of each character. There is some really funny stuff waiting somewhere in the wings; I know you'll find it.
----OEJ 18:56, 3 May 2008 (UTC)
