| Humo(u)r:
| 9
| Hehehe, I get it. It's a lecture from an unreliable narrator directed to a disbelieving subject.
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| Concept:
| 5
| The concept has been done before though, exploding [object] and such, and so has this lecture idea. It's not your fault, it's the grids fault.
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| Prose and Formatting:
| 4
| AAAAAAAA! For the love of GOD man, it's unfortunately horrendous, you start out good but then there are pictures everywhere and a GIANT Youtube video in the middle of it all. Gent, you must clean this mess up, I suggest taking out pictures that you think aren't really nessecary.
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| Images:
| 8
| Plentiful, but some are ill-fitting and poorly concieved. This is an article about exploding animals, it involves the middle east...why not an image (or even better a .GIF) of Wil E. Coyote exploding or Taz or some other cartoon animal exploding (real animals are icky.)
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| Miscellaneous:
| 6
| Well, the Youtube video helps out nicely, that's all I can say about. At least put some categories in there, since they can sometimes speak for the article itself, may even be the punchline or give the reader that last little laugh.
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| Final Score:
| 32
| Exploding Animals is halfway decent, that's optimistic enough and you may have something here. Just keep at it over time. Oh, and please lose that MWAHAHAHAHAHA, I see your unreliable narrator as a street smart urban fellow trying to con you out of five bucks, don't switch to mad scientist in the middle of it all. :) Best of luck.
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| Reviewer:
| --Witt,  of  UNion Entertain me* 05:43, 27 February 2007 (UTC)
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