Talk:Green Lightbulbs

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[edit] From Pee Review

Okay, I've been working on Green Lightbulbs for some time now, but I need some help on it.

• First I think some appropriate images, dealing with nuclear war, fallout, and green lightbulbs would be good.
• Second, any idea to make it funnier.
• If someone could expand the mathamatics section.
• The media reaction section needs some work.

Thanks, The article creator, --Yellowbounder 06:38, 2 December 2006 (UTC)

The article has many incoherent sections. This can be good when a common and well-understood thing is being distorted. For instance, if one explains how to make a jelly sandwich then incoherency may be funny. But if you are blazing a trail which involves green lightbulbs and nuclear war then you really need to explain what the fuck you are talking about with something like plain English and common sense. When you write "put together a flesh converter into every green lightbulb" people think blah and click the random page link. I do, anyway. The article should make sense from beginning to end. It should take the main idea, whatever you decide it is, and hold that idea throughout. ----OEJ 20:43, 4 December 2006 (UTC)