| Humo(u)r:
| 8
| Fairly funny, good use of repetition, no random or seriously sick stuff, although the diarrhea parts might cause a few readers to be turned off.
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| Concept:
| 9
| Pretty odd concept, but amusing nonetheless.
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| Prose and Formatting:
| 6
| Ya, good prose, but no links. I have a feeling that won't be a problem for very long, I like to do that one last when I write, too. But remember, links are an important part, so add as many as you can.
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| Images:
| 0
| OH NOES!!!1!!oneone1!! Ya, no images, but here's what I recommend: I don't 'chop, but you could prolly get all these through google.
- Group of surgeons standing around an operating table. Should be easy enough to find.
- Cup, mug, or other miscellaneous container of coffee.
- Car jumper cables and battery.
- And, if you can 'chop or get someone to do it for you, I recommend a picture of the "Crackpot Surgeon's Association's approved guide" book. I see it like one of those "For Dummies" books, but it's all open to interpretation.
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| Miscellaneous:
| 8
| A bit short, but other than that, a good page.
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| Final Score:
| 31
| Definitely a solid page. With images, more links, and perhaps a little more fleshing out in some places, it could be a masterpiece.
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| Reviewer:
| P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon  (Tick Tock) (Contribs) 03:30, 2 August 2007 (UTC)
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(Tick Tock) (Contribs) 03:30, 2 August 2007 (UTC)
(Talk • Contribs • CUN • Capt.) 03:48, August 2, 2007
