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This is my third article, and I think I did rather well, but I just want to see if there's room for improvement here! --Crazee Boy
| Humo(u)r:
| 8
| I thought it was pretty funny, but you need to rely on more than kitten huffing for humor.
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| Concept:
| 8
| It's a pretty good concept, but I believe you should add more truthiness to the about section. Also try to expand on it, and maybe develop a ripped off storyline of his naked furry drawings.
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| Prose and Formatting:
| 6
| The prose was pretty good, but the formatting gets pretty bad at the bottom. An image blocks up a lot of text it seems.
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| Images:
| 6
| The use of images was fantastic, but you need to figure out a better place to put the drawing of Champagne
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| Miscellaneous:
| 8
| It should be longer.
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| Final Score:
| 36
| I think it was a pretty good article overall. Good luck on your future articles man.
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| Reviewer:
| -Scout JoshHJ's Page and His Talk 23:33, 28 May 2007 (UTC)
| JoshHJ has successfully reviewed your article you submitted to Pee Review. Any questions or comments can go to his talk page. Hopefully you will enjoy! Need more editing or reviewing? Ask for it on my talk page!I'll help with creating articles also.
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