Talk:LOL WAR

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I pretty much just rewrote this entire article, but most of the basic ideas are the same. I added some consistency with the n00b r0xx0r, and the primary edit was that I removed the part where the Intellect and h4xx0rz suddenly happen to win, because it's kinda lame and doesn't make much sense, and it's in the "After the war" section. The conclusion and the final defeat of the n00bs should occur in the Pwn War article which currently is terrible and needs to be almost entirely scrapped and rewritten. The Pwn War article should also be the last online war article because three is probably too many already. I guess the main point of difficulty here is maintaining the humor of the absurdity of an online war without just rehashing what was done in the previous article. I'm not sure I did that, but the more coherent structure is more conducive to humor instead of the "man, this author is stupid" response. Any thoughts on this would be appreciated. --Jabbo 05:57, 16 December 2006 (UTC)