Talk:New Somalia

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either this or wikocracy, the idea has TREMENDOUS potential.

I agree. The idea of a country anyone can edit is great. The article at this point only focuses on the law sections. I might add a piece on editing culture, topography, climate, etc. A background section or history section would be good, too. Maybe you could look at Wikipedia's own Wikipedia entry for ideas. Anyway, just some thoughts. It's a good idea, which automatically makes it better than a number of articles created here.--Procopius 21:22, 22 August 2006 (UTC)

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{{Pee Review Table |Hscore= 7 |Hcomment= cute, funny in places... I think the "eradication" stuff comes on way too heavy though. More objective "observational" tone would underscore the dry humor. Also, while food/fat is certainly worthy of being in here (grin), think about branching out a little- child-bearing, PTAs, Junior League, suburban sprawl... all topics worthy of being picked on! |Cscore= 8 |Ccomment= good concept, and definitely needs to be in Uncyclopedia. Well organized; just needs to take a broader shot at its target! |Pscore= 8 |Pcomment= generally well-written, easy to follow. Latin names-- well, a little more subtlety would suit me, but might strike others another way. The more multisyllabic and pretentious the writing, though, I think the funnier the article would be-- particularly when you're speaking of trailer trash! |Iscore= 10 |Icomment= magnificent job. That Flava Flav pic, in particular, was a serious crack-up. :) |Mscore= 10 |Mcomment= good balance of text and pics, flows well... just think about taking more well-deserved potshots at the target, and might want to toss in the odd thing about Bush as well (always a chuckle). |Fcomment= th...th...th... that's all folks! Hope it helps-- very solid start you're working with there. :)