Talk:Officer Dave

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[edit] From Pee Review

So I redid alot of my officer dave article, if anyone would comment about it, that would be swell.

[edit] From Pee Review (Again)

hey i'm uhh new at this stuff...I entered a website i wanted to go to at school, and it was bloked by this guy, so i looked him up on here and there wasn't a page so i decided to write one about him) so.... —The preceding unsigned comment was added by WOwOWOOW (talk • contribs)

Well, you might want to make it less random. That random stuff rarely works and usually comes across and boring. I do like the line "died of a rare and serious condition in which the host of the disease finds a penny on the ground in the middle of the street and get's hit by a car." Also, the bit about the dad having sex with a carrot because you have nice eyes (that actually took me more time than i'd like to admit to understand). So yeah, you're getting there. --Anyone 20:14, 25 October 2006 (UTC)

[edit] Nice article

Officer dave is at my school too if you hate him, go to my web site: http://www.freewebs.com/antidave/ Really, he is evil. I know his pw (I'm not telling though).