Talk:Punch Me Elmo
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This is my first time so I just want to know if I'm doing it right.
| Humo(u)r: | 4 | Odd, non sequitur, and often just not that good. |
| Concept: | 7 | Tickle me elmo just begs to be parodied. |
| Prose and Formatting: | 4 | Needs work. Choppy, unprofessional tone. |
| Images: | 6 | That kid eating a cat = priceless. But more would be better. |
| Miscellaneous: | 4 | Definitely still needs work. I would suggest expansion, perhaps more in-depth history, and definitely add more about the dolls sadomasochism (ie things he may have been arrested for, "side jobs" (prostitution, porn, etc.). Stuff like that would help exponentially. |
| Final Score: | 25 | Perhaps you could rate back here? Cheers. |
| Reviewer: | Sir Ljlego, GUN VFH FIYC WotM SG WHotM PWotM AotM EGAEDM ANotM + (Talk) 20:49, 25 April 2007 (UTC) | |
