Talk:Purple nurples

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[edit] THIS ARTICLES AWESOME

...can we get some quotes in here though i mean really doesn't good ol' Oscar have something to say about this--Safteysalamander 02:17, 28 May 2007 (UTC)

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[edit] Purple nurples

Need help expanding... (harass) (contributions) …·°º•ø®@» 18:51, 13 May 2007 (UTC)

Humo(u)r:	6	The opening paragraph is almost factual, isn't it? So is most of the second. Straight-man passages are useful when providing background for and contrast with humorous ones, but I think there's too much fact and not enough silliness in the first part of the article.
Concept:	7	It's an OK concept -- not a stunning why didn't I think of that?!? but not an oh God this is a lame idea either.
Prose and Formatting:	8	Well-written.
Images:	8	The images are fine. See endnotes.
Miscellaneous:	7	I feel OK about this article. I'd like to see it improve.
Final Score:	36
Reviewer:	----OEJ 15:07, 27 May 2007 (UTC)

Endnotes: The YouTube video is quite funny...and oddly enough, that seems to present a problem. Because the video is quite good there is a danger that the Uncyc article could feel like it was written just as an excuse to post the video. (I'm not saying this is the case! I am merely saying that it may create that feeling in some readers.)

So there are a couple of things to think about: how to make the opening paragraphs more humorous and less straightforwardly factual, and how to handle the video inclusion.

Good luck with this article. ----OEJ 15:07, 27 May 2007 (UTC)