Talk:Sequel
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 | This article was nominated for deletion on December 13, 2006. The result of the discussion was Keep. |
[edit] From Pee Review
I just pulled this out of draft, but it seems a little too... reserved and subtle to me. Any comments or suggestions? This is my first full article so detail would be appreciated :) -- 54x 
F@H (XXXX!) 13:34, 17 March 2007 (UTC)
- Thanks for the kind words, IP user ^_^ I'll work on some of those ideas, they seem promising. :) -- 54x
F@H (XXXX!) 11:57, 26 March 2007 (UTC)
| Humo(u)r: | 5 | The idea has potential, but right now the article has some puzzling parts. |
| Concept: | 8 | Try drawing out the description of the plot of the two stories a little more. "In "Original," Main Character and his assistant, Assistant, had to fight the evil villian, Villian." Something like that, because the real cleverness in this article is in the idea of a story called Original and a sequel called sequel, and not in the weird random humor. |
| Prose and Formatting: | 8 | Nothing specific to say about this one. No typos, and the formatting isn't screwed up in any way. |
| Images: | 6 | The Matrix picture is good, but the George Bush picture seems slightly irrelevent to the idea. |
| Miscellaneous: | 5 | I got the impression that this article is a parody of crappy sequels, so try adding more about what made Sequel so dumb compared to Original. Like, "Sequel was very reminiscient of the plot of Original. In Sequel, Son of Main Character and Son of Assistant fight Son of Villain." |
| Final Score: | 32 | This is a really promising idea. Keep working at it. |
| Reviewer: | --74.69.223.36 20:10, 19 March 2007 (UTC) | |
