| Humo(u)r:
| 7.9513
| Though it's funny this articles a bit too relentlessly savage and negative. There needs to be a slightly more subtle build up to each Joke, as if a real fat person had written it and was inadvertantly revaling their insecurity, emptyness and pathetic greed.
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| Concept:
| 7
| I like the idea, it just needs a little more expansion to fulfil it's potential.
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| Prose and Formatting:
| 6
| Well written just needs to be refined a little.
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| Images:
| 5
| Needs a few more images maybe some examples of different types of obese people.
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| Miscellaneous:
| 7
| No idea what this sections for.
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| Final Score:
| 32.9513
| Overall it's a good start just needs a little more work and some slight expansion.
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| Reviewer:
| Winstanley1 13:53, 22 March 2007 (UTC)
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