Talk:Why?:Nuke the whales
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[edit] Why?:Nuke the whales
Found this in Newpages and fixed it up. Good, bad, suggestions for improvement? Thanks in advance, P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon 
(Tick Tock) (Contribs) 18:43, Sep 16
| Humo(u)r: | 7 | Definitely a laugh here and there, but at the moment it's mostly untapped potential than actual funny. For example, you have the rants about the whales, but you never specify why you should use nukes as opposed to, say, anything else. If you're looking to flesh it out, that's definitely an area to expand upon. |
| Concept: | 9 | See above |
| Prose and Formatting: | 5 | The grammar was pretty poor and the flow very choppy. I fixed it up here and there, and I know you kept a lot of the original content as it was, but you should seriously consider giving it another run-through and fix what you find. You wrote volcano. You can do it! |
| Images: | 8 | All of the pictures were appropriate, spare the whaling boat. What do we need them for if we're using nukes? |
| Miscellaneous: | 10 | Miscellany present |
| Final Score: | 39 | Has a lot of potential, like you said, but the prose needs somewhat of an overhaul. |
| Reviewer: | Grand General Wizard Etc x2 and Senator G/K/O/CUNT.K.F. WHORE! ZOTM MAFE VANDL UOTM WOTM TOP10 FP PMOTM UWotM 01:28, 17 September 2007 (UTC) | |
disgusting topic though
