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In-depth review, please! Has already been reviewed by OEJ who sorta liked it. ~ Cajek! <May 20, 2008 [16:19]>
| Humo(u)r:
| 8
| Very funny throughout, I love the concept. Let's see...when revising, I'd target the section where she interviews Satan, which I thought was least compelling. It doesn't seem you've got as strong a concept for that section. Maybe if Satan was set free because of the "cruel and unusual punishment," and becomes a hero in the eyes of the American public because he endured police brutality? That could be intriguing. Also, the "what has Barbara Walters learned?" section seemed a bit meh. It could be improved.
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| Concept:
| 9
| Wonderful concept. The number of interviews seemed just right--not so many that it becomes repetitive, yet not too few either. The length of the interviews is good too.
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| Prose and Formatting:
| 8
| I only noticed one error and I fixed it. You might want to proofread it again yourself though because I tend to miss thigns.
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| Images:
| 6.5
| Could use a few more images. You've got plenty of evil-doers in there...just add images of a few more of 'em and you'll be all set. Also, the caption for the Barbara Walters picture at the top seemed a bit...off. It didn't really fit with the writing style of the rest of the article. A new one would be nifty. And yes, I seriously did just use the word "nifty."
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| Miscellaneous:
| 8
| Averaged.
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| Final Score:
| 39.5
| Splendid work.
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| Reviewer:
| --THE 18:42, 25 May 2008 (UTC)
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