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[edit] Naruto

Humo(u)r: 2 Sorry chum, but gay jokes and prostitution do not humour make.
Concept: 3 Seems like you took the basic idea of the show and just slapped as many invectives on it as you could, to be honest.
Prose and Formatting: 7 You did a great formatting job. Tables, an infobox, even a non-factory quote, and all look good. May want to kill the other quotes though.
Images: 5 On the one hand, they are well done enough to accentuate the topic, but on the other, the topic itself isn't that great...
Miscellaneous: 4 Again, the invectives and the parodysham didn't really work. The whole paradox thing could work, though.
Final Score: 21 Don't get me wrong, it's tough to write an article on a topic like this, but in all honesty, it just doesn't work from this angle. Like I said, the paradox bit could turn out well, especially if you put the formatting knowledge displayed here into good use with formulae and such.
Reviewer: Ж Kalir, Awesome Author (alliteration affords additional awesome) 17:48, 22 July 2007 (UTC)
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